Kia ora, Last week I missed a couple of activities and today I did the Summer Haiku. I did both activities because my teacher taught us how to make them and I thought they were fun! I screencastify-ed my 2nd one A.K.A step it up. It was really fun and I thought it was really cool. Next time I think I could of done it a bit better with the images, but other than that I thought it was pretty good. Have you ever made a Haiku poem? Was it really fun? I hope you enjoy my poems:) Merry X-mas ( 2 days away !)
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, December 22, 2020
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Kia Ora Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity. Your haiku is well written, you followed the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule perfectly.
I like that all of your haikus were related to summer and having fun, you did a great job stepping up your post and including a video of you reading your haikus and you added some beautiful images that made your haikus really fun to read and hear.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Thanks for commenting Zana,
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