Hey bloggers,
This is my 3rd summer learning activity and we had to make a song chorus.
I called it Be nice because it was about being nice. It took me about 10 minutes to create it. My chorus was hard to make because it was not very easy to put all the words in.
The inspiration was from the Mosque shooting here in Chch NZ 18 months ago. What would your chorus be about if you had to make one?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Amelia,
ReplyDeleteNice work with this task. I like the rhythm it has, I can’t be sure what you were going for but to me it sounds like it goes, ‘Be kind’ and then a pause before ‘Don’t judge…’ and each line with a pause after ‘Be kind’ and ‘Keep caring’. How does it sound when you sing it?
The message behind the words is wonderful. I’m proud of you for choosing a worthwhile subject for your song and putting time into thinking about what you think people need to hear. There is simple, important advice in your lyrics with truth and kindness.
Great post Amelia,
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Hi Daniel
ReplyDeleteMy Chorus goes exactly like that!
Thanks for commenting on my blog (again !)
Hope you have a good day
From Amelia:)