Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 13, 2020
This is Just to Say - Poetry
Have you ever had a pen friend?
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Thanks Amelia, I have enjoyed your poem. The humour that you included made me laugh! I look forward to your next posting and more entertainment as this is really important as a writer.
ReplyDeleteyou welcome dad
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ReplyDeleteI loved this poem Amelia and it made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteAmelia i like your post's they are AMAZING!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!!!!!
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